1.切題很重要，也是第一點

2.文中句子無語法毛病和單詞錯誤

3.觀點明確不雜糅

4.句式不要太單一

5.書寫工整

建議平時可以多看看一些優秀作文以及英語文章，也可以就從英語教科書上採集素材

寫好高中英語作文應從5W去考慮寫就好！

5W就是What（何事） When（何時）Where（何處）Who（何人）Why（為何）。

可以請教老師，也可以單獨接受輔導，現在可以在網上找輔導班學，有針對性的講解，學到的也多，效果也會更好啊，業內的話高途課堂還不錯，小學到高中的各科輔導班都有

好的英語作文，是由好的內容+好的表達組成的。

對於高中和高考考查的寫作來說，內容發揮的空間很小，所以，高中和高考的好的作文主要是語言表達的好。

下面是高考書面表達評分細則中最高檔的評分細則，由此你可以看出什麼樣的作文是好的。

具體解釋如下：

一、內容要點：覆蓋所有內容要點。只要能讀得懂題目要求，在這個方面就不會出現問題。如果這個方面出了問題，請認真學習語文。

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三、有效地使用了語句間的連線成分。就是說，恰當使用連詞等，但千萬不要為了湊字數而使用連線詞。這樣做的話，給人的感覺就像是在紅燒肉裡插入了幾根木柴，很影響食慾。

做到上面三點，就可以達到最後總體評價的要求了，就是好的高中英語作文了。

特別提醒：千萬不要把學習的重點放在什麼體裁上，比如書信、通知啊等等。這是表皮。在體裁上的指導、備考和教研，是極其膚淺的，備考效果和學習效果很差，在高考中是不可能得高分的。

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今天分享英語寫作高分必備！15組高階替換單詞和用語。

英語寫作中，除了語法正確、表達準確地道，如果能再用一些較為高階的詞彙，會讓你的作文脫穎而出，獲得評卷老師的青睞和喜愛，從而取得高分。

good、great

高階替換詞：wonderful / excellent / fantastic / terrific

例：It"s wonderful to see her.

見到她好極了。

big

高階替換詞：enormous / tremendous / vast

例：The main bedroom is enormous.

主臥非常大。

very

高階替換詞：pretty / quite / terribly / greatly / totally / extremely

例：I felt quite happy about it at the time.

當時我對此感到非常開心。

first、firstly

高階替換詞：first of all / to start with / to begin with / in the first place

例：To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and I intend to work as a salesman because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons.

首先，做兼職是我的夢想，我打算做一個銷售員，因為這個工作不僅可以賺到錢，還能拓展我的視野。

second、secondly

高階替換詞：in addition / then / next / in the second place

例：In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as Mount Tai during the vacation.

其次，假期間參觀一些名勝古蹟，如泰山，是很不錯的選擇。

finally

高階替換詞：in conclusion / at last / in the end

例：In conclusion, let"s work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass.

最後，讓我們一起努力節約能源，保護動物、樹木、花草等自然環境。

many、much

高階替換詞：a lot of / plenty of / a (large)number of / a large amount of / a (great) deal of / a (large) quantity of

溫馨提示：

a lot of + 可數名詞複數/不可數名詞；

plenty of + 可數名詞複數/不可數名詞；

a (large) quantity of + 可數名詞複數/不可數名詞；a (large)number of + 可數名詞複數；

a large amount of + 不可數名詞；a (great) deal of + 不可數名詞。

例：I will not burden you with a lot of questions.

我不會提許多問題來煩擾你的。

help

高階替換詞：do sb. a favor / give sb. a hand / help sb. out

例：Also, I"d like you to do me a favor.

同時，我想要你幫我個忙。

I"m sure

高階替換詞：I am convinced that

例：I am pretty convinced that a wise choice makes perfect.

我非常確信，一個明智的選擇可以演繹精彩。

plan

高階替換詞：intend / mean

例：I intend to join in a Dragon Boat Training Camp.

我打算加入龍舟訓練營。

become

高階替換詞：turn into / change into

例：Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.

然後，他們開始大吼大叫，並變成了一場可怕的爭吵。

be good at

高階替換詞：have a good command / grasp of

例：Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.

此外，我英語學得很好，以至於我成了英語課代表。

(be) used to (doing) sth

高階替換詞：(be) accustomed to (doing) sth.

例：First, conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their kids.

首先，傳統的中國父母不習慣當面表達他們為自己的孩子感到多麼驕傲。

be thought to be

高階替換詞：be acknowledged to be / be regarded as / be considered (to be)

例句：Pandas are so lovely that bring fun to people and they are regarded as the treasure of our country.

熊貓非常可愛，可以給人們帶來歡樂，同時，熊貓被認為是中國的珍寶。

it"s generally believed that

高階替換詞：It"s generally accepted / agreed / assumed that

例：It is generally accepted that a boy must learn to stand up and fight like a man.

人們普遍認為，男孩子要學會獨立，像男人一樣去奮鬥。

最後，再囉嗦一句啦，記住的同時少不了學會運用哦，所以不妨試試在寫作的時候將基礎常見的詞彙替換為高階詞彙，這樣在提升寫作水平的同時，提升英語運用能力，衝刺英語高分更簡單，更高效。

給出一個觀點，要求考生反對這一觀點

Some people believe that ①____________（觀點一）. For example, they think ②___________（舉例說明）．And it will bring them ③_______________(為他們帶來的好處).In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④__________(我不同意該看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤____________(反對的理由之二)．Form all what I have said/In a word/In conclusion, I agree to the thought that ⑥__________(我對文章所討論主題的看法)．

觀點對比

The topic about … is becoming more and more popular in our school recently. There are two sides of opinion about it.

Some students prefer to consider doing sth.（Some students say … is their favorite.） they think that… （理由一）.What"s more, …（理由二）.　Moreover, … （理由三）

However, others believe … is a better choice for three reasons. （然而，其餘的人認為做某事是一種較好的選擇，有三個方面的理由） to begin with, … （理由一）. Next, ..  In addition, …

From my point of view, the former is surely a wise choice. The reason is that…（或者用：As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that…（依我來看，我堅決支援這種觀點… that引導同位語從句） 

There is a widespread concern over the issue that （作文題目）. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.

A majority of people think that    觀點一    . In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place,      原因一    .Furthermore, in the second place,    原因二    . So it goes without saying that    觀點一   .

People,　however,　differ　in　their　opinions　on　this　matter.　Some　people　hold the idea that   觀點二  . In their point of view, on the one hand，   原因一   .  On the other hand,   原因二   . Therefore, there　is no　doubt　that    觀點二    .　

As far as I am concerned, I　firmly　support　the　view　that    觀點一或二    .　It　is not only because        , but also because        . The more   , the more  

好處與壞處的對比

In recent years, …… has been popular. There are many advantages in……   First, …… Second, ……   Third, ……

However, there"re some disadvantages. ……（之一）.　Besides, ……（之二）.  Also, ……（之三）

In my opinion, it is true that advantages are more than disadvantages.（依我看，的確是好處多於壞處） I think…… One big advantage of … is that….  / One obvious advantage of … is …. / Finally, …

While it is true that …. has many advantages, it is also important to realize that….（雖然某事確實有許多好處，但是意識到…也很重要。 

要求考生列舉出解決問題的多種途徑：１. 問題現狀；２.怎樣解決（解決方案的優缺點）

In recent days, we have to face a problem A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, _________（說明Ａ的現狀）．Second, ___________（舉例進一步說明現狀）

Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, _____________（解決方法一）. For another thing ____________（解決方法二）. Finally, ______________（解決方法三）.

Personally, I believe that ____________（我的解決方法）. Consequently, I"m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________（帶來的好處）. 

說明利弊

這種題型往往要求先說明一下現狀，再對比事物本身的利弊，有時也會單從一個角度（利或弊）出發，最後往往要求考生表明自己的態度（或對事物前景提出預測）１.說明事物現狀；２. 事物本身的優缺點（或一方面）；３.你對現狀（或前景）的看法。

Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. First _________（Ａ的優點之一）. Besides ___________（Ａ的優點之二）.

But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that _______________（Ａ的第一個缺點）．To make matters worse,_______________（Ａ的第二個缺點）．

Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore, I would like to _______________（我的看法）．

From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way, （對前景的預測）．） 

要求論述兩個對立的觀點並給出自己的看法。

有一些人認為…  2.另一些人認為…  3.我的看法…

The topic of ①____________（主題）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②____________（支援A的理由一）What is more, ③(理由二). Moreover, ④_____________(理由三).

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,_________(支援B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥______________（理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦_____________(理由三).

From my point of view, I think ⑧__________(我的觀點）.The reason is that ⑨__________(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice .

問題與建議

提出問題：In recent days, we have to face a problem that……近來，我們面臨這樣一個問題，就是（that同從).

解決辦法：With the help of modern technology, we now have many means to solve it.  By doing ……, we can……What’s the most important is that……

結論：In a word, it is clear / obvious that……   Only when……can we …….

圖示類

模板一

開頭Look at this picture./The picture shows that.../From this picture, we can see.../As is shown in the picture.../As is seen in the picture...

銜接句As we all know, .../As is known to all,.../It is well known that.../In my opinion,.../As far as I am concerned,.../This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.

結尾句In conclusion.../In brief.../On the whole.../In short.../In a word.../Generally speaking.../As has been stated...

模板二

As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage　in　the table (graph/picture/pie/chart), _作文題目的議題_has been on rise (goes　up/increases/drops/decreases),significantly/dramatically/ steadily rising/decreasing from_％  in _年_ to _％_ in _年_. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that __現象總結___.

There　are　at　least　two　good　reasons accounting for __. On　the　one　hand, ____. On　the　other　hand,　___ is　due　to　the　fact　that __.　In　addition, __ is　responsible　for ___.　(Maybe　there　are　some　other　reasons　to　show ______.　But　it　is　generally　believed　that　the　above　mentioned　reasons　are　commonly convincing. )

As　far　as　I　am　concerned, I hold the point of view that _______. 再加上對策、口號。 

模板三

The chart gives us an overall picture of the 圖表主題. The first thing we notice is that 圖表最大特點. This means that as (進一步說明).

We can see from the statistics given that 圖表細節一. After 動詞-ing 細節一中的第一個變化，the動詞-ed+幅度+時間(緊跟著的變化) . The figures also tell us that圖表細節二. In  the column, we can see that accounts for (進一步描述).

Judging from these figures, we can draw the conclusion that (結論). The reason for this, as far as I am concerned is that (給出原因). / It is high time that we (發出倡議).

總結出來就是六個字：背！背！背！寫！寫！寫！

關於高考英語作文，總體來說，只要你掌握了一定的詞彙，加上語句通順，成功準確描述出題幹要求，並能說明自己的觀點，一般就能得到基本分數或者一般分數。如果能做到以下幾點，寫出分數較高的高考英語作文不是大問題：

1、收集歷年高考高分作文，分好型別，進行分析，比如運用哪種型別的語法較容易得到閱卷老師的青睞。比如，在開頭的時候，使用簡單的同位語句型，這一般都是加分點。然後，就加分句子可用作萬能句型或容易變通的句子進行摘抄背誦。

2、好記性不如爛筆頭。除了分類分析，以及進行背誦後，自己也要經常就某種型別的作文題進行練習，並形成自己的寫作格式，比如開頭，使用簡單的同位句，在中間部分，對某種現象進行闡述時，使用哪種型別的定語從句，能用there be 句型的地方記得改變動詞詞性，能夠使用被動句的地方要將主動句句型進行變通等等；在結尾的時候，形成自己固定格式的表達觀點的單詞，比如as far as I"m concernd，或是進行倡議，表達一定的正能量觀點。

綜上，如果能夠做到，這些都將成為你作文拿到高分的重要因素。祝好！加油！

高考英語作文是必考項，分值一般在30分左右，其實這個分數是不可小覷的，如果你想英語達到140+，英語作文必須滿分或者接近滿分才可以。很多同學說我的詞彙量也夠，語法也掌握的很全面，但是就是寫不出高分作文。

其實這種情況就是你沒有掌握英語寫作的模板，其實高考英語作文的每種題材的作文都是有模板的，我們掌握了之後再加上自己的詞彙量及句子語法，是很容易拿高分的，今天給大家分享的是【高中英語30套寫作模板及命題趨勢剖析】，由於篇幅有限只展示部分內容，高畫質完整版點選頭像悄悄說【英語】即可領！