I am a good boy,say a word can make you laugh.I am a boy would not back down,no matter what difficulties will not give up.I also have shortcomings.I am a loving crying boy,frustration,just cry.I am a careless boy,what is careless.This is me.The teacher commented:to write the introduction comes in the form of their own character,a very novel.The poem,the not only introduced the advantages of their own,also introduced their own shortcomings,to create a sense of humor,brave,love crying and careless boy image.Poetry is clear,a clear theme,but the rhythm is not very bright,to read without poetry style.The need to carefully,in wording and phrasing should pay attention to the rhythm of poetry." A setback only cry" proposal to change the" setback will only