The animal I like best is dog. In my childhood I have a dog. He is my favorite pet. He is very lovely. His name is Dahuang and he is two years old. His fur is short and black. He has big black eyes. His nose is very good. He can smell very well. He is quite small. He weighs about two kilograms.Dahuang’s favorite food is meat. He also likes bones.Peter is very friendly. I feed him every day. He never barks or bites. Dahuang likes lots of exercise. It is necessary to walk the dog in the park every day if you want it to be healthy. So I play with him every day in the park. Peter likes to run in the park. He often chases cats and birds. It is very interesting. Dahuang can find the way back easily. I think he is the cleverest animal of all.I like my dog and he loves me too. He is very healthy. All my family like him. We look after him very carefully. I think he will be happy to live with us. That is my pet dog
擴充套件資料：
適當使用高階詞彙。試著把“huge"等低階詞換成”tremendous“。平時多積累短語，用在作文裡。比如”be astonished at sth“（吃驚）。句型多變。平時學過的從句、雙重否定句、非謂語等等高階句型會為你的作文加分。長短句結合。總是讓人讀長長的句子，太煩人！閱卷老師也要心煩的。看看這個句子As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.長短結合，而且比較”高階“，值得學習。層次清楚不管什麼樣的英語作文，層次清楚很重要。層次不清楚的作文幾乎沒有得到高分的可能。用上一些邏輯連線詞。比如說”on one hand....on the other hand";"first of all......what"s more....in addition....last but not last"等等。連線詞可以到百度去查。不推薦“first....second...third...."不要犯低階錯誤主謂不一致、頻繁拼寫錯誤、中國式英語等等，犯了這些低階錯誤，是不可能拿高分的。所以寫完之後，一定要檢查一下，絕對不能有低階錯誤。平時注意積累平時多積累好的詞彙、好的句子。很多老師都會將常用的句型、詞彙作為專題教給學生，這時候要注意積累，考試的時候學會使用。
The animal I like best is dog. In my childhood I have a dog. He is my favorite pet. He is very lovely. His name is Dahuang and he is two years old. His fur is short and black. He has big black eyes. His nose is very good. He can smell very well. He is quite small. He weighs about two kilograms.Dahuang’s favorite food is meat. He also likes bones.Peter is very friendly. I feed him every day. He never barks or bites. Dahuang likes lots of exercise. It is necessary to walk the dog in the park every day if you want it to be healthy. So I play with him every day in the park. Peter likes to run in the park. He often chases cats and birds. It is very interesting. Dahuang can find the way back easily. I think he is the cleverest animal of all.I like my dog and he loves me too. He is very healthy. All my family like him. We look after him very carefully. I think he will be happy to live with us. That is my pet dog
擴充套件資料：
適當使用高階詞彙。試著把“huge"等低階詞換成”tremendous“。平時多積累短語，用在作文裡。比如”be astonished at sth“（吃驚）。句型多變。平時學過的從句、雙重否定句、非謂語等等高階句型會為你的作文加分。長短句結合。總是讓人讀長長的句子，太煩人！閱卷老師也要心煩的。看看這個句子As a creature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.長短結合，而且比較”高階“，值得學習。層次清楚不管什麼樣的英語作文，層次清楚很重要。層次不清楚的作文幾乎沒有得到高分的可能。用上一些邏輯連線詞。比如說”on one hand....on the other hand";"first of all......what"s more....in addition....last but not last"等等。連線詞可以到百度去查。不推薦“first....second...third...."不要犯低階錯誤主謂不一致、頻繁拼寫錯誤、中國式英語等等，犯了這些低階錯誤，是不可能拿高分的。所以寫完之後，一定要檢查一下，絕對不能有低階錯誤。平時注意積累平時多積累好的詞彙、好的句子。很多老師都會將常用的句型、詞彙作為專題教給學生，這時候要注意積累，考試的時候學會使用。