last weekend,I went to park with my friends,。the day was suny,the trees were deepy green ,the fowers were blossoming and gave off such a pleasant aroma,the water was clear,there were a few gooses,everything was so beautiful,of course, every peopie were happy,some of them were running,some were playing the violin ,some were singging,some were dancing and some were in the boat.,those made me relax,I had a good time that day..(上週末,我和幾個人朋友去公園,那天天氣晴朗,樹木翠綠,鮮花綻放散發出迷人的香氣,湖水清澈,有幾隻鵝在裡面遊,一切是那樣的優美,當然,每個人都很高興,有人在跑步,有人在拉小提琴,有的在唱歌,有的在跳舞,有人在划船,這些讓我覺得很放鬆,我玩的高興。{裡面用的是過去時和過去進行時的語法,還有一點就是玩什麼東西,球類名詞前不加the ,樂器類加the,像彈鋼琴是paly the piano,拉小提琴是play the violin}好好學習啊
last weekend,I went to park with my friends,。the day was suny,the trees were deepy green ,the fowers were blossoming and gave off such a pleasant aroma,the water was clear,there were a few gooses,everything was so beautiful,of course, every peopie were happy,some of them were running,some were playing the violin ,some were singging,some were dancing and some were in the boat.,those made me relax,I had a good time that day..(上週末,我和幾個人朋友去公園,那天天氣晴朗,樹木翠綠,鮮花綻放散發出迷人的香氣,湖水清澈,有幾隻鵝在裡面遊,一切是那樣的優美,當然,每個人都很高興,有人在跑步,有人在拉小提琴,有的在唱歌,有的在跳舞,有人在划船,這些讓我覺得很放鬆,我玩的高興。{裡面用的是過去時和過去進行時的語法,還有一點就是玩什麼東西,球類名詞前不加the ,樂器類加the,像彈鋼琴是paly the piano,拉小提琴是play the violin}好好學習啊