1. My English teacher is very good that she teache us，I want to ba a person as her正確說法：My English teacher teaches very well. I want to be a person just like her. 前半的重點是“教得很好”，你那句是“她的人很好”後半句as的用法不對。
2. I will try to myself best teach students and help they improves English score if I become a English teacher.正確說法：If I become an English teacher, I will do my best to teach and help my students in improving their English learning."an English"，不是 a English. “try to myself best”是明顯語法錯誤。讓學生學得好不等同分數高。
3. I can be good friendly students，play with them after class.正確說法：I will treat my students as my friends and join them after class.原句明顯語法錯誤，“課後與學生一起玩耍”，是假設學生在課餘必定去玩耍，意思不合情理。
4. I should hard study now，because of I want to become a good teacher正確說法：I should study hard now, because I want to become a good teacher.形容詞應在動詞之後，because 之後不用 of
1. My English teacher is very good that she teache us，I want to ba a person as her正確說法：My English teacher teaches very well. I want to be a person just like her. 前半的重點是“教得很好”，你那句是“她的人很好”後半句as的用法不對。
2. I will try to myself best teach students and help they improves English score if I become a English teacher.正確說法：If I become an English teacher, I will do my best to teach and help my students in improving their English learning."an English"，不是 a English. “try to myself best”是明顯語法錯誤。讓學生學得好不等同分數高。
3. I can be good friendly students，play with them after class.正確說法：I will treat my students as my friends and join them after class.原句明顯語法錯誤，“課後與學生一起玩耍”，是假設學生在課餘必定去玩耍，意思不合情理。
4. I should hard study now，because of I want to become a good teacher正確說法：I should study hard now, because I want to become a good teacher.形容詞應在動詞之後，because 之後不用 of