When I was 10, I was asked to make a speech naming(改為named) “My Dream” before the whole class. With so many eyes fixed upon me, you can imagine how nervous I was. However, I had no choice but (增加to) prepare for it. To draft the speech was the easiest for me, the(改為a) good writer, but the hard(改為hardest) part lay in my oral presentation from my memory. The real moment came while(改為when) I stood on the platform, my heart was(刪掉was) beating fast and my mind blank. Much to my surprise, the listeners were sitting quietly and wait(改為waiting) patiently without any signs of rushing me. Gradually I found me(改為myself) back. When I finished my speech, my audience applauded wild(改為wildly). I made it! From then on, my fear of talking before an audience disappears(改為disappeared).
When I was 10, I was asked to make a speech naming(改為named) “My Dream” before the whole class. With so many eyes fixed upon me, you can imagine how nervous I was. However, I had no choice but (增加to) prepare for it. To draft the speech was the easiest for me, the(改為a) good writer, but the hard(改為hardest) part lay in my oral presentation from my memory. The real moment came while(改為when) I stood on the platform, my heart was(刪掉was) beating fast and my mind blank. Much to my surprise, the listeners were sitting quietly and wait(改為waiting) patiently without any signs of rushing me. Gradually I found me(改為myself) back. When I finished my speech, my audience applauded wild(改為wildly). I made it! From then on, my fear of talking before an audience disappears(改為disappeared).