I prefer to study in this university for 3 reasons.
First, I love this city. 介紹這個城市獨特的魅力. It is also far away from my hometown. In the past 20 years, I have never lived by myself. I would like to take this opportunity to be independent. // it is also very close to my hometown. So I can still be together with my parents and take good care of them. They are growing aged and need my accompany.
Second, I should say I love this university very much. When I came here for the first time I was deeply impressed by the academic atmosphere and the faculty. In addition, your university enjoys a good reputation in this field. I think as one of the most famous 專 業 in our country, it provides people with enough room to get further enrichments.
關鍵點：
1) 導師們不願聽到的:
①母校不好;
②本校好考;
2) 導師們能夠接受的:
① 城市魅力;
② 離家遠/近;
參考模板：
I prefer to study in this university for 3 reasons.
First, I love this city. 介紹這個城市獨特的魅力. It is also far away from my hometown. In the past 20 years, I have never lived by myself. I would like to take this opportunity to be independent. // it is also very close to my hometown. So I can still be together with my parents and take good care of them. They are growing aged and need my accompany.
Second, I should say I love this university very much. When I came here for the first time I was deeply impressed by the academic atmosphere and the faculty. In addition, your university enjoys a good reputation in this field. I think as one of the most famous 專 業 in our country, it provides people with enough room to get further enrichments.