如,I am a student of Class Seven, Grade Two of our school.
我是我們學校二年七班的學生。
3、說明寫信的目的。
如I am writing to share some advices with you.
我寫信是為了提些建議。
中間:
中間寫你為什麼要提建議,以及提什麼建議。態度要誠懇。如,
We all know that study is the most important task for senior students, so it’s necessary for us to spend most of our time in study.
我們都知道學習是高年級學生最重要的任務,所以我們有必要把大部分時間花在學習上。
However, proper rest is necessary for us as well. But in our school, we only have a short night to rest, which I think it’s not good to us.
然而,適當的休息對我們也是必要的。但是在我們學校,我們只有一個短暫的夜晚休息,我認為這對我們不好。
I did a survey in our school that collect the ideas about having a longer rest every week. Almost all students say that they need more time to rest and relax.
我在我們學校做了一項調查,收集了每週多休息的想法。幾乎所有的學生都說他們需要更多的時間休息和放鬆。
結尾:
表達自己的願望。
I will be more than happy that you could accept the suggestion.
開頭:
1、開頭點名,可以加個敬語。
如Dear President;Dear teacher等等。
2、點名自己的身份。
如,I am a student of Class Seven, Grade Two of our school.
我是我們學校二年七班的學生。
3、說明寫信的目的。
如I am writing to share some advices with you.
我寫信是為了提些建議。
中間:中間寫你為什麼要提建議,以及提什麼建議。態度要誠懇。如,
We all know that study is the most important task for senior students, so it’s necessary for us to spend most of our time in study.
我們都知道學習是高年級學生最重要的任務,所以我們有必要把大部分時間花在學習上。
However, proper rest is necessary for us as well. But in our school, we only have a short night to rest, which I think it’s not good to us.
然而,適當的休息對我們也是必要的。但是在我們學校,我們只有一個短暫的夜晚休息,我認為這對我們不好。
I did a survey in our school that collect the ideas about having a longer rest every week. Almost all students say that they need more time to rest and relax.
我在我們學校做了一項調查,收集了每週多休息的想法。幾乎所有的學生都說他們需要更多的時間休息和放鬆。
結尾:表達自己的願望。
I will be more than happy that you could accept the suggestion.