I think going to school on foot is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for health. Next, it’s fun to walk together with friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What’s more, if we walk, our parents won’t have to drive us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving help to make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowed as they are now. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:It’s fun to ..., if從句，as crowded as, more and more, walk to school, go to school on foot等.行文流暢，過渡自然，採用恰當的過渡詞，如first, next, what’s more等。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理.
I think going to school on foot is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for health. Next, it’s fun to walk together with friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What’s more, if we walk, our parents won’t have to drive us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving help to make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowed as they are now. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.
試題分析：本篇書面表達應抓住“走路有利健康，和朋友結伴有利於 …… 讓父母節省 …… 使城市 …… ”等關鍵資訊，緊扣 “走路去上學”這一主題，適當發揮，從“走路上學”和 “優點”兩個方面來寫。同時，要充分利用參考詞彙，並注意對於詞數和相關資訊的要求，要採用恰當的過渡詞。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:It’s fun to ..., if從句，as crowded as, more and more, walk to school, go to school on foot等.行文流暢，過渡自然，採用恰當的過渡詞，如first, next, what’s more等。學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當引用，使文章的表達更有邏輯性，更富有條理.