I am sorry to disturb you while you are enjoying your vacation.I am writing on behalf of my classmates for your advice.
Recently we have been busy preparing Hamlet for the Drama Competition to be held next month,which is an important event in our school"s English Cultural Festival.
With the attached video of our rehearsal,I sincerely hope you could offer your guidance on our performance.I would also appreciate itif you could share your valued opinion on our costumes,acting skills and onstage light and sound effects.
Any suggestions are highly appreciated and we will make proper adjustments accordingly.I hope you have a pleasant vacation despite my disturbing you.
Dear Mr.Hurst,
I am sorry to disturb you while you are enjoying your vacation.I am writing on behalf of my classmates for your advice.
Recently we have been busy preparing Hamlet for the Drama Competition to be held next month,which is an important event in our school"s English Cultural Festival.
With the attached video of our rehearsal,I sincerely hope you could offer your guidance on our performance.I would also appreciate itif you could share your valued opinion on our costumes,acting skills and onstage light and sound effects.
Any suggestions are highly appreciated and we will make proper adjustments accordingly.I hope you have a pleasant vacation despite my disturbing you.
Yours,
LiHua.